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So like... OMG! Big difference huh? I knew it would be, I mean just look at the old one compared to this :) And I changed the landscape too, cuz I liked this better. I have the third page sketched out completely but I still need to scan it in and the second page will be up in a matter of minutes. I'm still thinking about the 4th page because its kind of the breaker in the first three pages. I'm not sure where I want to go with it quite yet but I definitely have an Idea and the first panel is already sketched and the second has the "shapes" :)

:new::heart:Anyways, Welcome to the land of Karanza... Or what used to be Karanza before the High Power was thrown out. This is a tale of their leaving and searching for a new home, living as rogues and fighting to keep their lives. They barely got away when they were attacked and now on their journey they are finding that it wasn't only a raid, they were all literally out to kill each and every one of them. Thanks to the Lekay Miraz and their once brother pack, Fire mountain, accompanied by several thunder wolves (such as their alpha and their guards), are on the run for the first time in their lives and they find this time, danger may be lurking any and everywhere... This is the tale of these legendary wolves When Darkness Sets.:heart::heart:

Not great but a little overview! I'm tired as well lol so I might have rambled, I'll change it later XD :tackle:

Anyways Credits:

Art and Characters all (c) to me
Castel's Tail :D (c) to :iconjskra:

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Only thing I see is that your rocks are very round. Maybe add some cracks and raw edges to make them more.. rock like. I think that will really help add some more and better texture to the story. Then you can add all the lil rain droplets and all to add to the effects of the whole story.

Still very nice and I love how you changed the color of the text! The sky is also very nice! Very good and well done!!! Keep up the good work and I hope to see some more!!! Now on to see page two!
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:icongalaxys-most-wanted:
Very nice!!!

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Ferrets are AWESOME! It's like a mad scientist gave socks brains!!!
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Thank you!

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When Darkness Sets....
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Are you Brave enough to be the Light in the Dark?
:iconhawkfrostsavenger:
This is new... Your other manga was cool, so this should be. It looks cool!

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Never fear! Wallmart is here!~ the guy in my dream
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"Do you have any tissues?"
"Use the sidewalk." *slams door in his face*~ the Wallmart guy and Joe
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I hated my last one XD it SUCKED and the pages just didnt fit, m really working on this one though :)

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When Darkness Sets....
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Are you Brave enough to be the Light in the Dark?
:iconhawkfrostsavenger:
I thought it was great, but this one is better.

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Never fear! Wallmart is here!~ the guy in my dream
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"Do you have any tissues?"
"Use the sidewalk." *slams door in his face*~ the Wallmart guy and Joe
:iconxlegacyxdreamsx:
:D I have to agree

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When Darkness Sets....
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Are you Brave enough to be the Light in the Dark?

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